So, is this what is called Prose?

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I have thoughts running through my mindLike a stream through mountain trailsThey flow and twist their wayDEMANDING TO BE HEARD!by Sandy 01/23/09Fair maiden hums a little tuneone not familiaran old friend all the same.No words to go alongwith this beautiful songas feelings start to soarthey get in the way of wordsfloating through my brain.When this dragon attacksmy pen cannot keep up,all that comes out is a garbled mess of words...emotions the trigger?.....I THINK NOT!Something deep within desires to get out.Can't find what That desire wants.Rambling is an aimless walkThrough the words inside my brain.Maybe there is something to find:Could be words on a page--nothing more.Thinking deeply is a good thing untilFair maiden falls into the well of wordstwisting, turning;yearning,burning........to get OUT!Watch out, I am over thinking now(Fair maiden giggles to herself as she realizes...)Or is it that I am not thinking at all?I guess it is good at timesto let your brain flutter aroundletting words seemingly flow outSometimes to the ground they fallSome actually find a page.People looking on do see,a little part of me.With each part you beginto take tidbits of my heart.Pieces of me gone for all eternity......but is seems;the more pieces that are gonethe larger my heart grows.Oh, if only these random words would cease;that dragon haunting me,I could finally find...peace.Giggles to you who chose to stick it out.Now the fun begins:the Battle ensues!Fair maiden continues to ramble.she cries for help to escape this dragon.Knight in shining armor respondsfrom a land across the seaas Dragon Dread takes over my will.Gallant knight in all his glorystruggles to free me, his fair maiden.Slashing, dashing to and frothis dragon to conquer...to no avail, dragon clings tighter!Knight in wisdom steps back,allowing dragon to continue.Reignites his sword for whichthe dragon to slay among the muses.Battling hard for heart of fair maiden.Fair maiden giggles as she says,"I fear there is more to come.""What, pray tell, fair maiden?" asks Knight.Are you tired of being usedby maiden from afar.My words I display at randomtrying...seeking peace.Thoughts are there, I go on........"No." is his response.Your sword please lift when...if it is needed to defend,honor of fair maiden from afar."Yes, my Maiden Fair, when needs it be,"says Shining Armor Knight.The dragon wounded, refuses to give wayto blows from sword of knight;honor on his side:The knight fights wildly, dragon to defeat.Suddenly, dragon looses his holdfalling to the ground,now mortally wounded.me thinks that is all there isfrom this mind running a muck.With words now written;May peace sought for come.Tis but a little I could doto kiss the knight on cheekWHAT! Honorable knightturns his head and lips do meet.Blushing red the maiden seesthe world think it fittingso, I dance my lips to hiswith approval from the Knight.A tender kiss is rendered forthe saintly knight has won,slaying Dragon Dread among the muses."Oh, Maiden Fair, the passion which within you lies...this kiss IS my reward! Yeah, what a prize to win,Fair Maiden from afar!"Now Knight sees a little into the mindof a mad writer, what say you?"Hell Yes," his reply........one disconnected thought, to connect story true...See title!is this too long to be Prose? and is it worth saving!?
 
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