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and this is my most recent attempt. I used to be half way decent but like I said, it's been a while lol
So what do you think?
Here you are again
my envy, my cancer
your beauty lacks no sin
nor questions unanswered
a conviction made with razorblades
is all it takes to kill the pain
I promise you won't feel a thing
and they won't see the crimson stain
until it's far too late
test who will bear a scar for you
see who can shed a tear
who will hold you dear to them
who will say a prayer
rotting chest of memories locked away
this time for real
a final plan to take control,
I tried so many times to heal
to find something inside of me
but nothing there is real.
Yes I know, it's a bit emo-ish. I was having a bad day lol
Melody, thank you. I've always had a little trouble with that. The first bits flow and sound right but then I start to think too much and it messes me up. lol
they always turn out better if I write them over several days, only during my moments of actual inspiration
So what do you think?
Here you are again
my envy, my cancer
your beauty lacks no sin
nor questions unanswered
a conviction made with razorblades
is all it takes to kill the pain
I promise you won't feel a thing
and they won't see the crimson stain
until it's far too late
test who will bear a scar for you
see who can shed a tear
who will hold you dear to them
who will say a prayer
rotting chest of memories locked away
this time for real
a final plan to take control,
I tried so many times to heal
to find something inside of me
but nothing there is real.
Yes I know, it's a bit emo-ish. I was having a bad day lol
Melody, thank you. I've always had a little trouble with that. The first bits flow and sound right but then I start to think too much and it messes me up. lol
they always turn out better if I write them over several days, only during my moments of actual inspiration