WanderingTraveler
New member
I'm petty to do this and am going to delete the other because I'm desperate for feedback of honest sorts.
"The Young Death"
Do I know God?
Why yes, yes I do
I went with him on
a walk, he kept me
True.
"Selfishness"
Selfishness is the name
of this contagious disease
Upon the mind
Upon the heart
This roaring beast breeds.
"A Friend's Depression"
She sees no light
All is dark
Upon a night
She walks
The stars void
of heaven fell
All is dark.
"The Murderers-The One Who Ran"
I leave you all
to your graves
Your fate your
shovel dug
I must go
now and pray
before the deed
Is done.
"Time"
So the clock
I see it tick
Before the chime
Comes ringing
Sing your songs
Love dark art
before the reaper's
Claiming.
"The Young Death"
Do I know God?
Why yes, yes I do
I went with him on
a walk, he kept me
True.
"Selfishness"
Selfishness is the name
of this contagious disease
Upon the mind
Upon the heart
This roaring beast breeds.
"A Friend's Depression"
She sees no light
All is dark
Upon a night
She walks
The stars void
of heaven fell
All is dark.
"The Murderers-The One Who Ran"
I leave you all
to your graves
Your fate your
shovel dug
I must go
now and pray
before the deed
Is done.
"Time"
So the clock
I see it tick
Before the chime
Comes ringing
Sing your songs
Love dark art
before the reaper's
Claiming.