Sing i wrote, titled KILL OR BE KILLED. like it?

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Struggling To Speak

New member
Do ya like it?
*VERSE 1*
Coulda worked this out,
Fought through the tears,
We battled out our bout
What a waste of years.
Broken, and shattered dreams,
Attacks on your pride,
Your painful screams,
From the agony inside
You know I saw it,
That look in your eyes.
Thought you'd be first,
But I took you by surprise.
*CHORUS*
This relationship is...
Coming to an end...
It's kill or be killed...
And I shot you dead.
*VERSE 2*
You tell me that you love me
And then you make me cry
You tell me hello
But you really mean good bye
We try, and try
But we're still not satisfied.
Ingite the spark we once had,
Try to keep from feeling bad
Your...Callin my name
I'm......Running away
Your...Setting the flames
I'm......Stuck in this game.
*CHORUS*
This relationship is...
Coming to an end...
It's kill or be killed...
And I shot you dead.
the genre will prolly be post-hardcore-ish
 
good job. Its always goof to share creativity. It's not bad. I do like the "it's kill or be killed, and I shot you dead"
 
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