Show some comments on my poem please? Explain also.?

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I’m a Martian
In tune with Neptune
Flying in a saucer
Landing on earth
Opening the door
Being strangely looked upon
So I depend on the stars
For I arrived from them
Persecuted of who I am
Looked at as if
Abnormal I may be
Or abnormal I am
Moving back to my planet
Where the atmosphere
Fills my lungs
Correctly pumps my heart
Sweet thoughts go through my mind
Sent here for a mission
But the mission I didn’t find
 
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