Should i try poetry? What do you think of this...?

BlackGuitar12

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I've never really written a poem on paper before I've thought one up in my head but completely forgot it.Give me your honest opinion.



For every week that goes by, my heart fills up with more emotion for you and your beautiful soul, as i walk by you softly in the old run down building i call my home, you look me in the eyes and i catch a glimpse of a slight smile upon your face, i wonder if I'm just a disgrace or maybe just an option in your fine life.When we became friends i never expected so much would come of it, i only thought it would remain a crush, but now it's far from it, i chase each day, each dream, each thought, that you would some day feel the same...
 
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