Courtney W
New member
I don't know if i am any good but one day when i was sad i wrote this tell me if im any good criticize please but do it nicely and tell me what i can do to better myself or if i should not write poetry. Thank you to who ever read this:
Drowning
I am Drowning
But not in water
But in sadness and misery
I ma going under water
Unable to stay above any longer
It pulls at me until i am under the current
But i do nothing to stop it
Its tugs and pulls and and i let it
A tear rolls down my cheek
I don't want to go under but i let it take me anyway
Drowning
I am Drowning
But not in water
But in sadness and misery
I ma going under water
Unable to stay above any longer
It pulls at me until i am under the current
But i do nothing to stop it
Its tugs and pulls and and i let it
A tear rolls down my cheek
I don't want to go under but i let it take me anyway