I really like to write an I'm currently working on 2 books. I would really like to post my writing somewhere to get some feedback, but first i want to know if my writing is accually worth posting(like is it any good) and if its safe(if there are copywrites or whatever so nobody can steal my work). Thanks! Here are excerps from both of my books.
Book 1: realistic fiction-
It was something I had to face, I couldn’t run away from it no matter how much I longed to, no matter how much agony poisoned my body. I couldn’t hide from the appalling truth of it. My father was dead.
I lifted my head slowly as tears sullenly rolled down my colorless face. My whole body was frozen, I had no control over my thoughts, no control over my actions. How could he do this to me? What did I ever do to make him want to take his own life? What force could possibly make him believe that his life was worthless? I just didn’t understand. I hadn’t lost only a father tonight, I had lost my very best friend, too.
As tear streamed out of my eyes, my mind raced, trying to make some sense of the unreal event that took place just minutes ago. It felt as if I was going to explode from all of the unanswerable questions, all of the daunting heartache. I tried with all of the power in my body to think of things that might possibly cause Dad to take himself away from me. Tears spilled down my colorless cheeks as if they would never stop, as if the burning in my heart would never cease.
and Book 2: science fiction-
Many dark shadow came together upon the bleak planet that Earth had become. Their work was partially complete, but nobody truly knew what Their work was. Only They really knew why they were becoming involved with such a helpless planet who‘s people spent the majority of their very short lives fighting constantly with one another. Nonetheless, They knew these people would be the last hope for them in this horrible time of despair.
“Our work is almost finished. When we are done with the inhabitants of this feeble planet, Tenyus will never again threaten our people,” grunted a deep voice.
“Weak as they may seem, Cyril, they are our only hope if our race is to survive. But only some will be of use to us. We must locate and gather the strongest; the ones who’s ancestors have survived the harshest of wars and diseases. That is our next task,” replied the leader to the first voice.
Oh and if you could include a few writer's websites that you think fit what i said that would be awesome!!
Book 1: realistic fiction-
It was something I had to face, I couldn’t run away from it no matter how much I longed to, no matter how much agony poisoned my body. I couldn’t hide from the appalling truth of it. My father was dead.
I lifted my head slowly as tears sullenly rolled down my colorless face. My whole body was frozen, I had no control over my thoughts, no control over my actions. How could he do this to me? What did I ever do to make him want to take his own life? What force could possibly make him believe that his life was worthless? I just didn’t understand. I hadn’t lost only a father tonight, I had lost my very best friend, too.
As tear streamed out of my eyes, my mind raced, trying to make some sense of the unreal event that took place just minutes ago. It felt as if I was going to explode from all of the unanswerable questions, all of the daunting heartache. I tried with all of the power in my body to think of things that might possibly cause Dad to take himself away from me. Tears spilled down my colorless cheeks as if they would never stop, as if the burning in my heart would never cease.
and Book 2: science fiction-
Many dark shadow came together upon the bleak planet that Earth had become. Their work was partially complete, but nobody truly knew what Their work was. Only They really knew why they were becoming involved with such a helpless planet who‘s people spent the majority of their very short lives fighting constantly with one another. Nonetheless, They knew these people would be the last hope for them in this horrible time of despair.
“Our work is almost finished. When we are done with the inhabitants of this feeble planet, Tenyus will never again threaten our people,” grunted a deep voice.
“Weak as they may seem, Cyril, they are our only hope if our race is to survive. But only some will be of use to us. We must locate and gather the strongest; the ones who’s ancestors have survived the harshest of wars and diseases. That is our next task,” replied the leader to the first voice.
Oh and if you could include a few writer's websites that you think fit what i said that would be awesome!!