Should I follow through with this story??

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I'm currently writing a story, but I'm not sure if I should keep going. I've been thinking about what I want to write for a long time now, and I just started a few weeks ago. Do you think this story could be good enough to publish one day? It's about a fifteen year old girl named Keiko whose sister,Yoko, is an award winning author. One day, she's leafing through her sisters new book, when she's suddenly transported into it. Now, she must live in the world her sister created and fight unknown evil. Meanwhile, Yoko, having witnessed her sister being taken, must discover the secret to why Keiko was taken in the first place. In the book, Keiko meets new friends and may even find a love interest. Will she be able to leave them behind when the time comes for her to return to the real world?,,,That's basically what the stories about. I'm a novice at writing so I'll take anyones opinion, good or bad. Also, I'd love to hear what would make it better. Thanks!
 
Sounds really interesting, I won't lie. I would like it more if the sister was writing the book and she was only just beginning, and then the sister was transferred into it (the sister never knowing though) and then the sister writes what happens, or gets ideas in dreams as her sister (whos in the book) is doing the actual events. So what she does in the world, gets transferred onto paper in a way, making the book a reality fantasy in a way.

I dont know... good luck though. Keep going foresure!
 
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