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Simon M
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What would be a good title for my short story? It is about a man who locks himself in his garage because someone is trying to kill him. He is a lawyer and has done many bad, but ignorant things.
The main themes are:
Control
Self-Reflection - (in purgatory which the garage is a metaphor)
Religion - what someone will do on their deathbed to go to heaven...
here is link to download:
http://rapidshare.com/files/117454709/englishshortstory.doc.html
And the killer is in control, the lawyer is all tense and the killer doesn't kill him because the lawyer gets control of the situation - the killer kills because he likes being in control. Please download its only 38 KB
btw the file is virus free - I scanned it with avast and zone alarm
Don't want it to be corny or to cool sounding. powerplay is interesting but to cool and a beam of light sounds too general...
The main themes are:
Control
Self-Reflection - (in purgatory which the garage is a metaphor)
Religion - what someone will do on their deathbed to go to heaven...
here is link to download:
http://rapidshare.com/files/117454709/englishshortstory.doc.html
And the killer is in control, the lawyer is all tense and the killer doesn't kill him because the lawyer gets control of the situation - the killer kills because he likes being in control. Please download its only 38 KB
btw the file is virus free - I scanned it with avast and zone alarm
Don't want it to be corny or to cool sounding. powerplay is interesting but to cool and a beam of light sounds too general...