Short Poem, criticism please!?

Larry

New member
This is the river
We drift along,
Alone.
Between lips
Of jungle green
On a liquid tongue
Of bumbling foam.
We hang our hands
In the water, and grab
An alligator, asking
“Where, why?”-
“Oh, my…please-
Ask gain later”
Slyly responds
The grinning alligator

Yes,
We have no guess
As to where we’re going
When adrift
In idleness
And without knowing.
 
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