Short Free Verse ..... inspired by a great poet! Comment it please.?

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This poem is inspired by LC, who was inspired by Buk

Manniquin

no vital signs visualized
just a plastic puppet
molded or sculpted by majority
a punk pupil
shush sweety, "you just say what I want"
you don't have a mind
when I want I'll pull your strings
and make you say what I want
again

till then stand there as my design
not pretend it's window dressing, darling
 
There is a male chauvinistic pig just above me , when you want to write a poem never be inspired by a plastic puppet ) who treys desperately to be someone he is not half as good as and never will be .

Your poetry is very good describes what a realised some weeks ago thank you
 
lots of women are just like this..............puppets to some smothering, controlling male pulling the strings.
Women's shelters are filled with this type.

A most visual and stirring piece I might add.
 
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