Shaping technique on a short story?

Chad

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a short story "sidewalk bleeding'' by evan hunter.

i wrote

The short story "on the sidewalk bleeding'' it is shaped by using Repetition. Repetition is used through the whole story, that it focuses on the characters. The Repetition on the short story takes us through Andy's feelings. An example is"He could hear the faint sound of the music now coming from a long way of. It shows us the effect of repetition and to reinforce the readers to the characters

my teachers comments~~ ?? ANSWER IS NOT CLEARLY WRITTEN.

can you guys to help me.. you can add more or edit it...
 
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