Been a while since I asked for an opinion, and the last ones werent great so I went around freestyling in my head a bit, so rate this and give tips? Wrote in a few minutes btw.
Im hatin this world
Spendin life behind the curtains
Never center stage
Just watchin from a distance
Its all overplayed
Hearin drinks cash and bitches
Everyones a victim
Im the only witness
And its coming down to me
Bein anything but me
Subtly
Creepin up behind everybody
Beat the bass and give rap another heartbeat
Im hatin this world
Spendin life behind the curtains
Never center stage
Just watchin from a distance
Its all overplayed
Hearin drinks cash and bitches
Everyones a victim
Im the only witness
And its coming down to me
Bein anything but me
Subtly
Creepin up behind everybody
Beat the bass and give rap another heartbeat