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ETN-RTTSAAW-S-EQ! 
...? I just wrote it, and I like it because it adds a sense of mystery to the plot, but is it too vague? It's supposed to be just telling you "There's magic. Secrets. Love, time's running out, and there's a war going on." does it scream the message to you or should I tone down the suspense a little and add more details?
Thanks!
Magic,
is taken for granted.
Secrets,
are turned deadly.
Love,
is mistaken for hate.
Time,
is running out.
Athre is crumbling at the feet of the darkness and time is of the essence. They scream for a hero, someone to pull them through this living nightmare, yet no sound escapes their lips. Ever so slowly the light, and all that is good, is sinking lower and lower. Shadows grow longer and eternal darkness approaches.
Even if good triumphs, evil does not stay quiet.
And now, evil is taking revenge.
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BQ: Have you ever Googled your story title before? Google it and, if you want, tell me two things that pop up
FINALLY, TIME FOR THE ETN-RTTSAAW-S-EQ!
You're like... what the heck is that??
Here goes nothin...:
Extra, Totally Non-Related To This Section At All, What-So-Ever, Question!!
ETN-RTTSAAW-S-EQ: Should I change my profile picture to a picture of me for a while, or stay anonymous as Daxter Locke? >
the real me would only be temporary, and I'd keep the Daxter Locke part of my username, but I was just wondering 
...? I just wrote it, and I like it because it adds a sense of mystery to the plot, but is it too vague? It's supposed to be just telling you "There's magic. Secrets. Love, time's running out, and there's a war going on." does it scream the message to you or should I tone down the suspense a little and add more details? Thanks!
Magic,
is taken for granted.
Secrets,
are turned deadly.
Love,
is mistaken for hate.
Time,
is running out.
Athre is crumbling at the feet of the darkness and time is of the essence. They scream for a hero, someone to pull them through this living nightmare, yet no sound escapes their lips. Ever so slowly the light, and all that is good, is sinking lower and lower. Shadows grow longer and eternal darkness approaches.
Even if good triumphs, evil does not stay quiet.
And now, evil is taking revenge.
- - - - - - -
BQ: Have you ever Googled your story title before? Google it and, if you want, tell me two things that pop up
FINALLY, TIME FOR THE ETN-RTTSAAW-S-EQ!
You're like... what the heck is that??
Here goes nothin...:
Extra, Totally Non-Related To This Section At All, What-So-Ever, Question!!
ETN-RTTSAAW-S-EQ: Should I change my profile picture to a picture of me for a while, or stay anonymous as Daxter Locke? >
the real me would only be temporary, and I'd keep the Daxter Locke part of my username, but I was just wondering