This is a bit embarrassing. You see, I'm a writer by trade, I write lots of stuff for retail catalogs and the like, and I've been very successful at it; however, when it comes to discussing my accomplishments or selling myself, I'm all thumbs!
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YOUR MISSION: To re-work these sentences into something I'd be proud to show to a potential employer!
BACKGROUND This is for my RESUME, 2 to 3 bullet points summarizing my experience.
LENGTH: Make them about as long as the ones I have below, that I've written, re-written, and re-written again, until they sounded worse than ever!
(SEE BELOW FOR BULLET POINTS TO COPY EDIT)
• Copywriter with over five years of experience spinning marketing strategies into succinct, effective,
customer-focused communication
• Ad agency proofreader fluent in Chicago and AP styles turns over assignments with impressive
speed and consistent accuracy
• Results-driven Copywriter and Proofreader with demonstrated ability to deliver meticulous,
sales-oriented copywriting for direct-mail catalogs, web catalogs, marketing collateral and product descriptions
• Highly effective professional, recognized for a proactive and collaborative work-style that fosters the successful completion of multifaceted projects, meeting of impossible timelines and crafting of the perfect message
HR FOLKS ESPECIALLY WELCOMED!
Thank you! I wish I could give everyone 10 points, but I can't, so if you think yours is really awesome, show me. I'll gladly return the favor for you too!

YOUR MISSION: To re-work these sentences into something I'd be proud to show to a potential employer!
BACKGROUND This is for my RESUME, 2 to 3 bullet points summarizing my experience.
LENGTH: Make them about as long as the ones I have below, that I've written, re-written, and re-written again, until they sounded worse than ever!
(SEE BELOW FOR BULLET POINTS TO COPY EDIT)
• Copywriter with over five years of experience spinning marketing strategies into succinct, effective,
customer-focused communication
• Ad agency proofreader fluent in Chicago and AP styles turns over assignments with impressive
speed and consistent accuracy
• Results-driven Copywriter and Proofreader with demonstrated ability to deliver meticulous,
sales-oriented copywriting for direct-mail catalogs, web catalogs, marketing collateral and product descriptions
• Highly effective professional, recognized for a proactive and collaborative work-style that fosters the successful completion of multifaceted projects, meeting of impossible timelines and crafting of the perfect message
HR FOLKS ESPECIALLY WELCOMED!
Thank you! I wish I could give everyone 10 points, but I can't, so if you think yours is really awesome, show me. I'll gladly return the favor for you too!