RESUME HELP! I NEED YOUR OPINION...?

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I'm a hair stylist and I'm writing a resume for a top salon... i got everything figured out but my objective.... I got this so far
Objective:
TO OBTAIN A POSITION AS A HAIR DESIGNER TO FURTHER MY CAREER IN THE COSMETOLOGY FIELD.

OR

PURSUING A CHALLENGING AND REWARDING POSITION AS A HAIR DESIGNER TO FURTHER MY CAREER IN THE COSMETOLOGY FIELD.

what do you think....which one sounds better to you?
 
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