Remember that everyone has been young at one point.

[lil hip hopper : )]

Anyways, two of my frienRAB and I recorded a little bit Sunday and I was hoping for some unbaised criticing of it and suggestions. But before you say that it sucks note that this was a very fast recording and the friend that did editing wasn't putting much effort in it.


Click here for the song, NOW!

 

[Emily1005]

Poor guitar.

Maybe if you turned it into an actual song, with some structure, it could have potential.

That would be a positive review, by the way.

 

[♥laNoviaDeTito♥]

So I guess no one is going to say anything besides cardboard. Come on just listen to the "song" (it has no lyrics and is only part) and tell me what you think. Remeraber we aren't amazing or anything.

 

[jetgirl]

I'll review it before saturday.