Read, rate & comment on the first and second chapter of my novel?

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mollayy

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click the link below to the read chapter one: http://www.worthyofpublishing.com/chapter.asp?chapter_ID=68202

click the link below to read chapter two:
http://www.worthyofpublishing.com/chapter.asp?chapter_ID=68249

rate out of 10
comments??
what do you think??
improvements??

thanks
-molly
 
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