Read my Poem Please. Tell me what yo uthink?

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Mary

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it is a Villanelle poem. or at least an attempt at one.


stand strong, lift forth thy ear to me
take cover and shield your weary eyes
no other can lift thee up but He

for men can feel the lost one’s plea
through deceit, mistakes, and lies
stand strong lift forth thy ear to me

the lonely ones duck down to flee
vision clouded from the darkened skies
no other can lift thee up but He

fall to the ground, raise your hands and see
shadow yourself from the worlds demise
stand strong, lift forth thy ear to me

You not only deny Him once but three
becoming someone you despise
no other can lift thee up but He

forgiveness shall always come to thee
even as He hangs and dies
stand strong, lift forth thy ear to me
no other can lift thee up but He
 
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