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Joey

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Be Love the transformation

Love: should not be demanded, handed out, nor denied. Such an abundant, infinite product should consume us; becoming us. I will no longer give or receive love, but, only ‘be love’. Therefore, allowing my love's incalculableness to scintillatingly shine, like the most incandescent sunrise to hover above this harmonious habitation. The world will then observe, first hand, the amiableness of this aura, which I carry with such serenity and satisfaction. As it illuminates the world; I will demonstrate a peculiar, yet, colorful genre of love that is concealed from humanity at present. AND… once you encounter this insuppressible, furious, ungovernable, and equitable force of perpetual love, your eyes will marvel at this anomaly. My love will contaminate, corrupt, and metamorphose ALL narcissistic partialities. Thereupon, authorizing this revolutionary carousal of expurgation, and subsequently initiating the pursuit of inexhaustible love. Once all have been affected and effected by this delicate embrace, the world will gleam, luster, and rejoice. When you become love, you: affect, inspire, and change lives using unconventional, authentic ideals. These ideals directly opposing discrimination, and influencing ubiquitous love; after all, we’re all veraciously kindred.

The Transformation of Love
 
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