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Can you read and maybe even imporve the blurb i have written for my book? I know its hard to undersrand but it's meant to be, all becomes clear once you've read the book. Sorry to be part of this whole vampire craze with my plot but im not looking to get published, i just love to write and i'm kinda getting sucked into the whole vampire idea anyway!!
read please xxx
I’m Sian J. Grey; vampire in life and in death.
Sian is special. She knew this from the moment she opened her eyes aged two seconds (told you she was special)and saw that her mommy...was drinking her blood. Sian is the type of vampire that no one else is: a true-born. The type of girl that popped out of her mummy’s stomach craving blood, the type of girl that popped out of her mommy’s stomach only to be brutally slaughtered by her own mom. I guess this doesn’t seem all that special but when I tell you that a vampire giving birth is unusual but a vampire giving birth to a baby that had the strength to kill a whole neighbourhood of people aged 3 is unheard of, then you will reconsider your withdrawal of shock. Not only is Sian J. Grey a one of a kind vampire, she is also the strongest in the world. Or so she thought until she met Logan.
Thanks! xoxo KATE xoxo
Okay so i didn't read it through before i posted it. I'll have another shot, using your comments to help me...thanks guys!!!
I’m Sian J. Grey; vampire in life and in death. (this is the part of the blurb where it says a line from the book, its not jumping from first person into third person.)
Sian is special. She knew this from the moment she opened her eyes aged two seconds (told you she was special) and saw that her mommy...was drinking her blood. Sian is the type of vampire that no one else is: a true-born. The type of girl that popped out of her mummy’s stomach craving blood, only to be brutally slaughtered by her own mom a mere few seconds later. I guess this doesn’t seem all that special but when I tell you that the vampire that gave birth to Sian J. Grey was the first vampire to ever conceive a child that could murder a whole town of people, then you will reconsider your withdrawal of shock.Sian J. Grey is not your average American High School Student, she is the strongest vam
read please xxx
I’m Sian J. Grey; vampire in life and in death.
Sian is special. She knew this from the moment she opened her eyes aged two seconds (told you she was special)and saw that her mommy...was drinking her blood. Sian is the type of vampire that no one else is: a true-born. The type of girl that popped out of her mummy’s stomach craving blood, the type of girl that popped out of her mommy’s stomach only to be brutally slaughtered by her own mom. I guess this doesn’t seem all that special but when I tell you that a vampire giving birth is unusual but a vampire giving birth to a baby that had the strength to kill a whole neighbourhood of people aged 3 is unheard of, then you will reconsider your withdrawal of shock. Not only is Sian J. Grey a one of a kind vampire, she is also the strongest in the world. Or so she thought until she met Logan.
Thanks! xoxo KATE xoxo
Okay so i didn't read it through before i posted it. I'll have another shot, using your comments to help me...thanks guys!!!
I’m Sian J. Grey; vampire in life and in death. (this is the part of the blurb where it says a line from the book, its not jumping from first person into third person.)
Sian is special. She knew this from the moment she opened her eyes aged two seconds (told you she was special) and saw that her mommy...was drinking her blood. Sian is the type of vampire that no one else is: a true-born. The type of girl that popped out of her mummy’s stomach craving blood, only to be brutally slaughtered by her own mom a mere few seconds later. I guess this doesn’t seem all that special but when I tell you that the vampire that gave birth to Sian J. Grey was the first vampire to ever conceive a child that could murder a whole town of people, then you will reconsider your withdrawal of shock.Sian J. Grey is not your average American High School Student, she is the strongest vam