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[Gabriel]

Hi I'm 16 I wrote this a few months ago. Please tell me what you guys think. Advice. Suggestions welcomed lol I wrote this for this girl I really like. Um a lilttle cheesy maybe but oh well.. Thank you!! "You!" * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * You can't imagine how much I wish you would be mine. How much I would give, do to make you my girl. I think about it and it gets me happy imaging how it would be like to be more than just friends. I think of *it as a mission impossible. But then I say why wouldn't I be able to have a girl like you! I am determine to make you fall for me and I would do everything in my hand to make you happy. I may not be able to get you everything that would make you happy, but one thing I can assure give you is companionship?/happiness *I mean i can be more than just a boyfriend I can be your best friend. I don't think I'm like other guys I'm not those guys that want to do anything to hurt you that have hurt you before. I want you to feel, be happy, protected when your around me. The last thing I would want is to hurt you hurt. I care to much about you to do such a thing. I call those guys who have hurt you stupid for not valuing what they have when other people like me would die to have a girl like you. A beautiful, intelligent, dedicated, hard working girl like you. I admire you. I think you do much at your age but if your happy then go for it i admire you like that. there is no such thing as perfect but to me you couldn't be any more perfect. I have dreams. Dreams I hope I to reach soon and your one of them and you know what no matter whAt I'm going to try and if your not for me then it doesn't matter because I tried and at least in the future I won't be lying in bed thinking what it be like if I tried. Sometimes i feel like giving up but then reading this brings me back up wanting to try once more.