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Michael Snoxall

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Hunger, No Linger
By Michael Snoxall


Spoiled for choice,
Too spoiled to choose,
I’ve got what I need,
I just won’t feed,
The hunger will rage,
But I’m locked in this cage,
I’m ignorant and I won’t let go,
I’m not sure if I will ever know,
Well off,
Don’t care,
Resource plenty,
I still don’t dare,
Fill this hollow,
Or save it for later,
The door remains closed,
This hunger enraged.





I'd also like to hear your thoughts and interpretations on it :) thank you for your time.
 
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