RE-WRITE “IN MY LOVE’S INNOCENT EYES” How is this poem?

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RE-WRITE “IN MY LOVE’S INNOCENT EYES” How is this poem?

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13 May 2010
Zahid from Pakistan

IN MY LOVE’S INNOCENT EYES

In real few of men are wise
Those haven’t seen her eyes!
Time they blink blood dries
Their blink is like sun rise

The reason my soul cries
Is the only when she denies
When I ask her to exercise
Romance before spring dies

She is the one who flies
In the presence of demise
Her presence is to apologies
God’s company to surprise

I never went on her to advise
I did my best to compromise
As a secret of my success lies
In my love’s innocent eyes
 
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