once again i thought up a single line, and wrote the rest on the spot, sort of flow-writing. Please rate it (1-10 scale =D), give me some feedback, and if you can think of a title please share, i still suck at choosing them =S.....
the devil in an angels gown,
but a wolf in sheeps skin,
upon her head is a golden crown,
her guise merely paper thin,
she turns the bright smile to a frown,
with a foe as so, i can't win
all i can do is watch as we slowly drown
and as that devil impishly grins
the devil in an angels gown,
but a wolf in sheeps skin,
upon her head is a golden crown,
her guise merely paper thin,
she turns the bright smile to a frown,
with a foe as so, i can't win
all i can do is watch as we slowly drown
and as that devil impishly grins