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He’s Using You - Donald Simmons

How could you accept him into our home?
It’s just that i don’t like him
And you ignore me like a drone
When i say these signs

He’s using you for our goods
Our money, our friendship
When he has nothing; like no foods
When i say that

He’s using you
For our stash, our lifeline
He’s greedy for your heart
When he has no sweet loving clementine

He’s using you for our goods
Our money, our friendship
When he has nothing; like no foods
When i say


PS -- The song's about me trying to tell my mom that her deadbeat boyfriend is using her, but she just won't listen to the signs i tell her
by the way my mom is dating a deadbeat after 16 years of marriage with my dad who died in october.... i've heard that most women wait 1 year after their spouse dies b4 they date again... true?

I'm 14 also. I write songs as a hobby, nothing major. should i consider something bigger with it? my music? (I've written lots of songs and put them here on answers for people's opinions. i've written about 8 or 9 so far that are here on YA)
 
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