Rate these haiku **only people who know a lot about haiku**?

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1.
glass melting at one
freezing puddles lay
people become cold

1.3.2011

2.
people want to see
standing tall, legs are lengthened
world is consumed by dark

3.
girl's bored kick scatters
beads of white ice loosely piled
turned grey by exhaust

4.
his paunch colliding
get off me get off please please
didn't mean for this

5.
glass melting at one
liquid frost lays on the ground
people become cold

1.5.2011

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If you could tell me what you imagine when you read them and if you could clearly imagine something, that would be well appreciated.
 
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