Rate the lyrics I just wrote?

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Please don't steal this from me, it came from the heart. I hope everyone enjoys.

at the point where the end has gotten brighter
yet the entrance seems to get tighter
every step with caution with fear of another
want the steps to be wider but the eyes I cover
trying to peak but the fingers not moving
the steps come closer but I'm not improving
living a life just to get more attention
need more time to reflect need an extension
yet i continue to trip on the step toward heaven
take a few steps forward and fall back eleven
steps are never smooth same goes with life
wake up not knowing if there'll ever be a wife
someone special is not worth the example I lead
you'd fear the stepping stones that I see
never satisfied with any outcome or result
every mistake continues to be my fault
why cant I just succeed with the life i dream
my life continues to just be one big theme
life's too short when you only chase for success
materialistic things that i overly obsess
just to learn that this is just one big step
lost a big dream that i wish i could of just kept
 
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