Rate my writing please?

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Plistifid

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Just posted a new chapter (number 5) to my website. Would appreciate it if people could take a look at it, give some feed back, and maybe catch any errors I might have missed. Also any feedback on the story as a whole would be appreciated too.1

http://www.jaycenwsmith.com

quick link to the chapter i just posted: http://www.jaycenwsmith.com/journal.html

thanks :)
 
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