Please rate the poems and their titles, be critical, not rude, this is experimental, and I am unsure as to where I will be going with this, it is slightly darker than my normal material.
The Darkness of Hope
Our lives are lived in ignorance, suffering, and hate
That which is our light of hope
Is our bringer of doom
Hopes of peace are the darkest of blacks
Our savior the inevitable
Only death can save us from ourselves
Our Truth
The world is a fruitless tree
Life for the sake of life
It is pointless
A constant struggle
A constant depletion
Inefficiency reigns
People are fighting to live for nothing
We have no purpose
We construct elaborate structures
We fight for land
We live luxuriously
But for whom?
Our efforts fruitful but poisonous
Our fossils only to be washed away
Our goal to destroy
Our method to consume
Our fate to die
I asked to know what quality it is, and to be honest, I am perfectly amused wrecking the shallow dream realist person's day.
The Darkness of Hope
Our lives are lived in ignorance, suffering, and hate
That which is our light of hope
Is our bringer of doom
Hopes of peace are the darkest of blacks
Our savior the inevitable
Only death can save us from ourselves
Our Truth
The world is a fruitless tree
Life for the sake of life
It is pointless
A constant struggle
A constant depletion
Inefficiency reigns
People are fighting to live for nothing
We have no purpose
We construct elaborate structures
We fight for land
We live luxuriously
But for whom?
Our efforts fruitful but poisonous
Our fossils only to be washed away
Our goal to destroy
Our method to consume
Our fate to die
I asked to know what quality it is, and to be honest, I am perfectly amused wrecking the shallow dream realist person's day.