rate my poem poets out there..26 male from uk x?

poetlake

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today the family were at my mums
playing talking
funny enough not arguing

stayed for few hours
dull outside
with mini showers

not much convo
coming to the end
have we over stayed our welcome
you need to know when to go
until everyone starts getting so low

right we're leaving now i say
yeh it was a very pleasant day
i phone them after i arribe home
the little children had broken
my mothers fav garden knome

arguments broke out
once again
we left in the right time
with my family its all to lose and
nothing to gain

is everyone family like this
or are other families full of bliss
are you coming round tomorrow everyone
no i say, haha ill call it a miss
 
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