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vanessa

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Dancing

Flying roses pass my legs
As the rythym carries me to the sun
I feel the golden warmth embracing me.
Dance, Dance, Dance, the sun says.
I reach out my glowing arms and feel the tender soft clouds,
How soft, how soft...
Day fades and night bleeds through
as the starts sparkle creating a new rythm.
 
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