rate my poem 1-10 please?

David

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I wrote this poem for a girl, that doesn't know I love her and I hope to read it to her one day ;)
My first poem btw



Here I lay next to you
With all my dreams come true.
I could’t think than
Anything better than to be with you.

Your eyes are like a million stars
Shinning in the night.
Even though you do not know
It is true I love you.

My only wish is to kiss you
So I can feel your gentle lips.
My heart has only one desire
That is to see you smile.

Because from just that act
I feel I’m a God.
What many say isn’t true
I just care about you.

While I lay next to you
With all my dreams come true.
I keep thinking about
How much I love you.

Now with nothing else to say
I hope you have a nice day.
 
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