Rate my drawing? EASY 10 POINTS FOR MOST CRITIQUED!?

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Im 14 :] Its supposed to be kind of animeish... oh, and i know the anamoty is ALL wrong, but bear with me ^^; i want to take an anamoty class, but when im older. i dont like drawing nakie peoples ;D
BTW, each person only has one eye to symbolize becoming one. (read my artist comment on the picture) Rate out of 10 please :3
http://crystal--rain.deviantart.com/art/Together-87200124
 
Very nice job for a start. I don't know if you did this on purpose, but I think the eye is too big even for anime. But I like how you used symbolism and such. But thats WAY better than how I started.
 
Its nice, very emotional and well thougth out,its deep, i like it!!! You should become an artist!!!
 
I would give it an 8. I personally perfer ink to pencil graphite, but the design is definitly unique and a nice new perspective.

Great symbolism, one other nice way to create a similar drawing would be to creat two slightly different faces, yet with similar features. For example, for your next sketch, create a female with one eye on the top and a male below, yet each would have similar facial structure, etc.

great overall skill though!
 
I'm so sorry. But i don't like it. =[
The lines aren't very clear and the drawing isn't all that 'anime-ish.' :[
I think you need to see what anime is actually like, its more gentle and careful, yours represent something of un-experienced' people. =[
Maybe you can go to art class? :S
i'll give this picture a 4/10
 
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