The howling wind whipped through me as I stood in front of Samuel, his dark hair in his face hiding his fire red eyes, his skin white as snow, and his teeth stained in blood and dagger like. I wrapped my jacket around me, hoping to remove the cold chill I had.
" Elvira so glad to see you i see you got my invitation". He glared at me making his eyes burn right through me.
"I came to end this Samuel, to end the haunting". I breathe heavily as I say this, and I look him in the eye.
" I see,so your giving yourself to me to save your precious little boyfriend". He stepped closer and reach out his hand. I took a step back.
" Don't be afraid you'll be like me." He was close enough to touch my face.
" I'm not afraid of you I"m not going to be a demon like you either." I looked around for something to defend myself with if I needed to.
" They tried to hide you but your light was to bright in the darkness you made me a path, now you have only one guardian left to defend you and he's not here." He whispered in my ear. He pushed my hair back. " I've waited 2000 years to be reborn again and you are the key every 500 years a key is born but everyone beats me to it, this time your in my grasp.' I went stiff and couldn't move.
" You will never do harm to the world again Samuel, cause he will come and make sure you suffer for doing this to me." With that he pushed me down and my head smashed aganist a rock. I could feel the blood seeping through my clothes.
" He'll never know you were gone." He saw the blood and gave me a smile. Everything became blury and I couldn't breathe. My eyes became heavy and the last thing I heard was his sinister laugh and then him saying " Good night Elvira". And I drifted into the darkness.
I want to know if I'm good enough to be an author so please be honest. Thanks
Thanks Im in the 8 grade
Its a sample of my story because I dont want anyone coping my stuff
" Elvira so glad to see you i see you got my invitation". He glared at me making his eyes burn right through me.
"I came to end this Samuel, to end the haunting". I breathe heavily as I say this, and I look him in the eye.
" I see,so your giving yourself to me to save your precious little boyfriend". He stepped closer and reach out his hand. I took a step back.
" Don't be afraid you'll be like me." He was close enough to touch my face.
" I'm not afraid of you I"m not going to be a demon like you either." I looked around for something to defend myself with if I needed to.
" They tried to hide you but your light was to bright in the darkness you made me a path, now you have only one guardian left to defend you and he's not here." He whispered in my ear. He pushed my hair back. " I've waited 2000 years to be reborn again and you are the key every 500 years a key is born but everyone beats me to it, this time your in my grasp.' I went stiff and couldn't move.
" You will never do harm to the world again Samuel, cause he will come and make sure you suffer for doing this to me." With that he pushed me down and my head smashed aganist a rock. I could feel the blood seeping through my clothes.
" He'll never know you were gone." He saw the blood and gave me a smile. Everything became blury and I couldn't breathe. My eyes became heavy and the last thing I heard was his sinister laugh and then him saying " Good night Elvira". And I drifted into the darkness.
I want to know if I'm good enough to be an author so please be honest. Thanks
Thanks Im in the 8 grade
Its a sample of my story because I dont want anyone coping my stuff