Rate/critique this short poem of mine...please?

Endless Dream
By: Adam M. Snow

For I to dream an endless dream,
of beauty, wonders and grace,
for us to ride the moonlight beam,
and to look gracefully at your face.
To be free from this world of flaw,
free to go to a world on high,
no more hatred of maw,
and all our fears must die.
*Typo*
and ( I ) to look gracefully at your face.
 
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