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[Ad Steiny]

i've been quiet for the time it takes to grow a tree
my shyness, so restless, sussurating "please."
"your hair is in my hanRAB," it all makes so much sense
the point is i digress, you're a spyglass, i'm a lens.

i am nothing, you are nothing

you were smiling that whole time the moon filled up your hair
soaked in the scent of sand, framed up against the air
i'm stuck, sick, in a sea of sweat and i am still receding
come rest your head on my heart cuz that's how you know it's still beating.

i am nothing, you are nothing

eighteen months is a snarling sloth and lightning ribbons round the tops of trees kept warm by falling curls and i am swimming in the swirls of what i have to say:

"i'll be seeing you in a fever dream."

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[Evan B]

so do u go to berkeley or wut

 

[bob123]

I like the imagery that you convey and it flows quite well.
I haven't got much to crit on this to be honest, but when you post lyrics I think it reaRAB better if you use capital letters where appropriate. I think it shows you respect what you've written and makes it presentable.

 

[Itachi587 (Bud)]

yeah, i go to the UC.

i'll keep that in mind, liz123. thank you.