A.a Krumpits
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*** I posted this question on my alternate account.but nobody answered. Please do not steal my ideas. Thanks in advance for your help.*** okay so I have a few questions(obviously) about my story. Its called braindead ( question #1: is this a good title?) And its about a woman police officer named jasmine chase (question #2: is this a good name?) Who is relocated to a small town in north carolina. There she meets james everheart (good zombie name?) And he is nothing like his name. He is completely ugly,old and i want to say dissheveled but what does that mean? Lol im only 13 i dont have a very big vocabulary yet. So then jasmine and james ( i didnt realize how that sounded till now! Is that corny? Should i change her name to maria? Any other name suggestions) start to talk.by the way james is a zombie. And james figures hey she would make a good meal,because his family is poor but human money isnt worth that much and his family would be very thankful. so he tricks her into going with him to the zombie world,and she cannot return to the mortal world until she has permission to be free. Humans are much like animals there, they do work for about 3 days and then they are eaten. She has to come up with a plan before they eat her. So general questions: is my story any good? Will publishers publish a 13 year old's story,does age matter to them (I am very mature)? And lastly is it something you would normally interested in? I need to know what my target audience is.