Put up or shut up...a poem?

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mtheoryrules

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what a queer sort
with scoff and snort
those fellows that jeer
when they are here
they piss and moan
bout how they can own
any would be poet
and they darn well know it
yet when the time to strike
is not quite right
they run and hide
tease and decide
how it they should have told it
to that internet wanna be poet
opps made a mistake there
in last couplet
oh well
wait it is called a couplet right?
 
Good all the way but I don't think
the last two lines ( yes a couplet)
say what you want.

old old Bob
 
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