Loving Kitty
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It just A basic idea I wrote down three minuets ago... I normally get ideas rite before I go to sleep, then actually write the poem later... but does this sound like a good general idea for a poem? Probably the suckiest one ive had in forever, but idk if I shoud work on it, or just forget about it....
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Im pressed up against a brick wall.
My face buried it the blood stained bricks.
And too my knees I fall.
Please dont walk away.
Im curled up behind a locked door.
Pounding and screaming to get to the other side.
Tears drown the floor.
I can feel you walking away.
Im staring into your beautiful blue eyes.
I say theres nothing wrong,
But as I turn away, my heart cries.
And I let you walk away.
^Well thats my idea... does it kinda sound interesting?
Untitled...
Im pressed up against a brick wall.
My face buried it the blood stained bricks.
And too my knees I fall.
Please dont walk away.
Im curled up behind a locked door.
Pounding and screaming to get to the other side.
Tears drown the floor.
I can feel you walking away.
Im staring into your beautiful blue eyes.
I say theres nothing wrong,
But as I turn away, my heart cries.
And I let you walk away.
^Well thats my idea... does it kinda sound interesting?