Prayer style poem i wrote looking for opinons on please?

Jen

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Vessel


Father above help me understand, for as your child

I am saved, though my heart weighs heavy with the troubles of this

world resting upon it. Your will be done, and though I may not understand

I attempt to do as I know would be your ways.

I watch with curious eyes as this world seems to turn more evil with each setting

of the sun. We see children being killed, people robbing others for mere possessions,

men who come unto us as your servant stealing from us as we hand it over unto you.


Your son's simple life under investigation, Human curiosity attempting to prove your word

to be false. No help for the homeless or the poor. Who are chastised and left to

die on the cold streets. Girls turning to selling their bodies to be able

to make it day to day. All the while our churches close their doors

and pretend it doesn't happen.

Father god help me understand why parents abandon children who are angels in

your sight, why do some parents adopt children for the money

the government will pay? How is it that truth is no longer

the side lady justice leans toward. How could she be that blind to

follow a fool's illusions?

Why must we all act as if we don't care, help me guide me to

show this world your love as I walk the path you have written for me.

For if I make a mistake or shall I fall I know the angels will be

there to pick me up and to right me in your ways....

This I offer to you a simple prayer from your

child who needs understanding, calm my heart and

let me be your vessel.....













© 2009 Jennifer Bergerson
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i asked alot of questions in the poem but i was trying to convey that we all as humans ask these things and in the end i ask for him to show me how to be his vessel i am not blaming anything on god it's just asking to be able to understand.
thanks
 
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