Poets please edit my poem! It's VITAL!!!?

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My father danced to the tune,
That the threat played.
He came home and hit my mother,
Making everyone feel afraid
Before he was taken away,
He didn’t act like this
He would give my mom,
On her cheek, a friendly kiss
I never thought my father would hit another dame
For alcohol is
Deadly threats name.
So, basically, I need someone to make changes if possible. It is a school assignment, to write a personification poem. Please give me possible titles, and feel free to change whatever. Thank You.
 
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