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I express my love with these words
All I want to do is make you mine
I offer you these words and this is all I can find
My sweet time and my trust
Its not about what I want from life but what I need
I'd like to someday be with you
Ever morning, every evening, and every night,
I would like to spend it with you .
There is nothing else I would rather do
But here I am amongst it all
And All I ask in return is for you to be mine
 
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