Poetry? you ask me to write with rhyme?!?

G

Giggles

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why is it when I try to write in rhyme
something interrupts me every time
laundry or dishes or something else
changes the flow I lose the spell

why can't the dishes do themselves?
why can't laundry JUST appear done?
why can't I enjoy one day of writing
without the infernal questions that come my way!

writing this for critique,
I wish you to find it unique
but if it is only a bit of rubbish
I will surely start to blushish.

Thank you for your time
might you have a simple dime
one to spare for me you see
so I can have a cup of tea?

(finally a rhyme!)
(giggling over my self made pity)
(am I serious or not?)
see if i give a hoot!

Again, THANK YOU.
WOW! The Troll is not happy, look at all the thumbs down! not from me you see...giggling

nice answer Neon!
 
This lass, giggling and wiggling
girl Giggles and her squiggles
A pot of tea, please, please, pretty please
Not till three, dishes now, can't you see

Chuckling myself. In a way they are like doing crosswords. You get a thought for a line and then you need to make it fit with meter and rhyme. Your first two lines are great but then I think you started giggling as you wrote! lol So...hoot, hoot!
 
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