Poetry:- what do u think of this "my gift from above" ?

[Pharmacist]

" I need somebody to stand by me..
to take my hand when I can't see..
I need somebody to lean on..
somebody who makes me keep going on..
I need him to feel strong..
to put things right when they go wrong..
God!! I've been waiting for so long..
to find a place where I really belong..
I found your heart so full with love..
makes me feel peace like a free dove..
my forever love..
I know you are my gift from above.."

thx for reading..
love & peace from islam..

 

[shirleyf]

This is pretty good. There are a few parts that the flow is a little off, but, overall I think its nice. Thanks for sharing.