Poetry: Re post, new and improved or leave it how it was?

Amanda

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"The Way" to Progress

The worlds keep
to their courses
in covenant to the One.
Each more breathless
and brighter than the other.
Only equal by age,
Life differs in Intelligence.

When our world was made
all the gates of the firmament
opened to assist.
Each exchanged
their Garments and Treasures
as a token of Love's first
naked embrace,
swirling, to unseal
Its Authority.

This vast monotony
is not a repetition
of sameness,
No, it is more different
than snowflakes,
And none are otiose.

Progeny is eternal,
and so We descend
into the dregs,
because “The way”
has opened the gates.
'each' and 'only' in the first part should not be capitalized. Oops :o)
 
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