Poetry Question. URGENT!?

use of similar consonants and vowels, two effects and if you count terseness that makes three. Wanna go for four? blood and burt dont naturally go together.. that is maybe a juxtaposition of sort with a odd tension
 
I'm not an expert but it gives continuation of thought and a cohesiveness to your idea, and if done right lends texture to your poem...

When wishing for wings I fly to the farthest star.

Good luck.
 
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