poetry project interpretation?

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Peach

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the type of poem is suppose to be an imagism poem:
which version is the best...?
A)
Head turned
Eyes lock
Smiles appear
Arms embracing
Hands clasped
Lips touch
Tick Tock
Time's stopped

B)
Head turned
Eyes lock
Smiles appear
Arms embracing
Hands clasped
Lips touch
Tick Tock
Stop

C)

Head turned
Eyes lock
Smiles appear
Arms embracing
Hands clasped
Lips touch
Tick Tock
Silence

D)

Head turned
Eyes lock
Smiles appear
Arms embracing
Hands clasped
Lips touch
Tick Tock
Pause

please feel free to correct my grammer and stuff; and please tell me what you think it means; thanks :)
 
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