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Twilight Love
by: TJ Becker
Stars silently dance with clouds billowing white.
moon hums a lullaby to the sleepy night.
Fledglings gathered, tucked safe in their nest.
Whitin folded wings, parents vigilantly protect.
Crickets tune their fiddles melodically begin to play.
Lightening bugs flicker a magical light display.
Puffed up frogs on lily pads jump and croak a song.
Symphony just for us while waiting on the dawn.
Hands entwined we walked along natures carpet at our feet.
Encouragement was whispered for this moment so elite.
As we kissed, the night stood still silence thick in the air.
We bore out souls before the night eternity declared.
Healing rains began to fall, steam rising from the ground.
A gentle breeze caressed the mist glistening all around.
Lay me down on a mossy bed let your fire become my flame.
Trees supplied seclusion out love was then proclaimed
Questions:
- List any similes and metaphors used by the poet.
- In what lines is there repetition?
- Where is imagery used?
- Is there internal rhyme, end rhyme, or both?
PLEase i need help..
by: TJ Becker
Stars silently dance with clouds billowing white.
moon hums a lullaby to the sleepy night.
Fledglings gathered, tucked safe in their nest.
Whitin folded wings, parents vigilantly protect.
Crickets tune their fiddles melodically begin to play.
Lightening bugs flicker a magical light display.
Puffed up frogs on lily pads jump and croak a song.
Symphony just for us while waiting on the dawn.
Hands entwined we walked along natures carpet at our feet.
Encouragement was whispered for this moment so elite.
As we kissed, the night stood still silence thick in the air.
We bore out souls before the night eternity declared.
Healing rains began to fall, steam rising from the ground.
A gentle breeze caressed the mist glistening all around.
Lay me down on a mossy bed let your fire become my flame.
Trees supplied seclusion out love was then proclaimed
Questions:
- List any similes and metaphors used by the poet.
- In what lines is there repetition?
- Where is imagery used?
- Is there internal rhyme, end rhyme, or both?
PLEase i need help..